*sucks teeth* Yep, totally not feeling this...first of all these one and a half page chapters are killing me. It's like watching a low budget movie that keeps playing suspense music even when it's not needed. Second, I don't like any of the characters. Not one of them has any depth. Third, this "secret, thrilling" premise...I think I already have an idea of what it is and I don't like it!!! The only reason I'm forcing myself to keep reading is because I want to know if I'm right. I'm going to try to make it to the end. It's just a bit "cheesy"(for lack of better terms") for a thriller.